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  1. 2008.01.22 [영작] 영어작문 "사교육에 관해서"
2008. 1. 22. 15:51

[영작] 영어작문 "사교육에 관해서"

Second education system

 

 

 

These days, many parents want that their children are learned education by second education system. This trend makes too many second schools and academies. In addition, it makes some illusion that young children think their have to go to there. However excessive second education has various problems to get a well balanced education when they grow up.

 

Firstly, many overweight children are increasing now. Overweight is a big problem among young people. It was started at second education syndrome. There are not physical educations as a result; many children have to sit on chairs all days. Furthermore it brings about not only overweight but also bad shortage of exercise to young people. For example, some children in rich parents who work together can not walk even 30 minute for a day. Because when they go to school or academy, they are moved by their parent’s car.

Secondly, the second education system makes that they live to themselves. They have to compete with their friend from school’s score even they want or not. When I was young, I played some game with my friends. The games need a lot of players such as traditional games. However these days children play game alone by computer. Because they can not have a time to play game with friends.

 

In my view, the second education system is not bad to children however if it is emphasized too excessive, it will be a big issue in the future. Therefore it is controlled by a law and Government has to make a law about the education out of school. For example, if they study in second school for about 4hours, they have to play on the ground at least 30 minute or something like that. The greed is never end. The greed toward education has to be controlled.

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